My description writing.

11.5.10 W.A.L.T: describe - with voice
Mrs walker and jump jam, they go together like peanut butter and jelly, because Mrs Walker is so bouncy like jelly and jump jam well jam and peanut butter! Mrs Walker is so bouncy like a big blue ball bouncing around on the stage.She is energetic like a fizzy drink bottle that was just shaken. Shae is always so happy like a tiger that had just caught its prey.Mrs Walker has THE longest finger nails EVER they could cut a loaf of bread!She's so funny like a frighted frazzled frog. She has mussels for Australia. She loves her job likes it the best necklace in the world! She always wants energy back because she gives so much to us. She is always funny like the funniest comedian in the world. Not to sound too down but she has the sharpest voice like the meanest most maddest teacher in the world! When she teaches jump jam she looks hold on does enjoy it! I think I covered everything.well there you have it Mrs Walker.

S.A
WHAT did I learn?
I learn't that you can't have a smile after a smile because you will over do it.
WHAT did I do well?
I think that I did the description about Mrs Walker very well
WHAT is my next learning step?
My next learning step is to not have too many smiles in my writing.