Tuesday, September 14, 2010

My Best Writing

As I walk along the walk way I feel the cold autumn breeze on my face and arm and legs.All the leafs that used to be Green are now brown, orange, red and yellow.All the leafs are slowly swaying swishing down to the ground. As I walk, I feel as if I was walking through a big arch with lots of leafs falling to the ground. The trees are slowly swishing from one side to another as I stop walking I lie down on a leaf bed. A big gust of wind sunddley blows all the leafs of making a top layer of fresh leafs on me.

2 comments:

  1. Cool Kate if describes the scene well and the leaves falling

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  2. I like your descriptions Kate ..well done. I could see the leaves swishing and blowing around you.

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