Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Athletics


"Take your marks... GO," Yelled Mr Bron. We were off at over 200,000 miles per hour. OK maybe not that fast but you get what I mean.
Run and JUMP and run and JUMP! Stumble.
Do you know what we were doing?? Yes we are doing hurdles.


I can see the finish AND, I am coming second! "Niamh,Kate,Renne and Jasmine," Yelled Mr McNourght over the yelling of our yer 6 and 5 friends. YA! I came second.
" Take a rod and sit down over there," Said Mr McNorght as he handed us the small orange rectangular rods. So I do.Next up the finals.


" OK every one in this line go up to the start line," Mr McNorght told us.
We walk up. OK So now the butter files in my tummy are flapping their wings at over 200,000 miles per hour. OK maybe not that fast but you get what I mean.
OK so now we are at the finals .

2 comments:

  1. Really interesting and cool Kat! spelling check tho

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  2. great discriptive writing right in the action.
    next time use language features

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